Comments on: Short Story http://hermenio.wordpress.com/2007/12/14/short-story/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Fri, 01 Feb 2008 20:10:40 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Mr Mollet http://hermenio.wordpress.com/2007/12/14/short-story/#comment-37 Mr Mollet Mon, 07 Jan 2008 18:27:45 +0000 http://hermenio.wordpress.com/2007/12/14/short-story/#comment-37 The format you used is incorrect because you have mixed plays and prose. The quotes should be in quotation marks with the appropriate punctuation. The police officer said, "You have to be strong and you have to learn to live with it." The spaces are correct, nothing to fix there. Since the story is almost all dialog, you could use some more details/description. The format you used is incorrect because you have mixed plays and prose. The quotes should be in quotation marks with the appropriate punctuation. The police officer said, “You have to be strong and you have to learn to live with it.”

The spaces are correct, nothing to fix there.

Since the story is almost all dialog, you could use some more details/description.

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