To begin this introduction there are a few things you should know about me. First, I am a teen mother. Second is that one of my most desired aspiration is to be done with school. And last but not least is that I love to read and write. These are three very unique things about me.
An interesting thing about me is that I am a mom. Doesn’t sound interesting, does it? But the thing is, is that I am only 17 years old. So I’m not just a mom, I’m a teen mom. And being a teen mom is nothing easy. I have to deal with allot of responsibilities, responsibilities that include getting up extra early than usual teens would do to get my daughter ready. I have to be punctual for her doctor’s appointments. Well there are countless resposibilities. It’s also really hard to concentrate in class because I’m constantly worrying about her. It’s been really hard and still is because I cant do things that most teens do. I cant go out to hang out with friends, I cant go to the mall with friends amd nope dont even mention parties because while every other teen is out doing these things , I’m at home taking care of my little girl. And one things for sure is that I wouldn’t change that fact for anyhting in the world.
One of my most desired aspiration is that I want to finish high school. Finishing high school is very important to me because high school is one of the requirements everyone needs to succeed in life. Although stying in high school has become an obstacle for me because of my daughter, I have learned to overcome it. I have learned to overcome it by staying slightly focused in what I am in school for, and by slightly I mean most of my focus is on my daughter. But by looking at my daughter I realize that I need to stay in school until I am finished because she deserves so much more than what I already have, she deserves a promising future.
One thing or maybe two things that I absolutely love to do is to reading and writing. Not many people know this about me but I enjoy doing it so much that is has become a habit. I love to write poems because it expresses how I feel. I have a variety of poems that I have come up with. Some of my teachers have mentioned that I should become a writer due to my writing skills but I am still hesitant about that. But I do hope to one day write a biography of my life and all of my experiences, so when people read my story they can feel what I feel. And as far as reading, it’s wonderful. Reading is one of my most treasured hobbies. I’ve read numerous amounts of books, of course of my interest like the stories of “Harry Potter”, “Memoirs of a Geisha”, “Fly Girl”, “For the love of Money”, and “A Child called It” and there are many more and still more to come. When I read I feel like I am part of the story. Finally reading and writing occupy me from doing things that I am not suppose to like doing drugs or drinking.
These three things make me different from other people because not many girls are young mothers like me, and not many of them finish school something that I desire very much. And finally not many people are fond of reading and writing, something I absolutely enjoy doing. So I’m not just different I’m unique.
December 10, 2007 at 5:23 pm
Well done. Your introduction and conclusion could use some more background information about you. There are a few minor spelling errors, look through and find them. Aloo is not a word, neither is alot (a lot is two words, or just tell how many exactly).
Thanks
Mr M